Very fine piece of work! Story, art, and animation was excellent! I guess the only critique I have is the story started off a little too slow for me but everyone has their preferences.
Very fine piece of work! Story, art, and animation was excellent! I guess the only critique I have is the story started off a little too slow for me but everyone has their preferences.
The animation looked great! the only problem I saw with this was the lowish quality sound effects and the odd pacing. I felt like you could of added a little more background noise so the other sound effects wouldn't sound like they were taken off a sound board and thrown in the project. And the pacing of the story was a little awkward but maybe you intended it to feel like that. But HOT DAMN the animation looked fine son!
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Age 28, Male
USA
Joined on 7/16/13